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First, I whip it out.
Then I thrust it
With great force.
Every angle,
It penetrates,
Until, with great strength,
I ram it in!
In the end,
We are all satisfied,
And you are set free.

Aroused by playboy
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WhereDarknessResides Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Well then. I like how you left it open for interpretation...even though a lot of people may be thinking dirty thoughts. Good job ~N
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MisplacedFox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
***PG RATING***

I just heard a thud.
Followed by an exhale of exhaustion.
Thank you for stitching my broken heart. 
May your needle of satisfaction find more to work with.
And may the thread of time bind us all to the freedoms we need.

:nod:

***Ugg - I'm going back to my corner now, it naughty & dirty and I like it there.***
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NativeShadow Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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Puppypawzx Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014
:clap:
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drawstoomuch Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Um..............Ima go scream now.......Oh yess 
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nightswarrior Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Devil May Cry?
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Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*0*
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Fireafyfan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Artist
EVER THOUGHT OF THE KIDS THAT LOOK AT THIS? O3O
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Fireafyfan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Artist
>.< srsly?!?!
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belarusian Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nose bleed 
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kgiessinger Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
I'm confused... you thrust it in and it penetrates, and THEN you ram it in? Isn't it already in by that point?
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KOREAlchemist Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Take me now, senpai~!
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ilovechickens123 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hhhchsgsghsu47mindfuckboomxtxhxjbjkcfhxdfvfhFudycrh
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Haapily-Never-After Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Is this about sharpening a pencil? Even if its not, this is really good.
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sunsetshimer Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student Artist
oh holy jeezus
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starthedragon Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
seppuku? jesus ./////.
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sonadowfannnnnn Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol interesting?
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Kit-Kit-Ridge Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whaaaaa... Er, I'm not okay. Looking around to make sure no one is looking over my shoulder. Awkward... OH HEY MOM! What? Sex Poetry! No! It's about sharpening a pencil. Or I sword. Which ever kind of sword you want it to be. Yep.

I feel like some troll just told me to watch Boku No Pico... Uaaghh... Also, I wasn't thinking about Dante, I was thinking about when Zevren recited something simalar to are lovely warden...  God I feel dirty. Not even the good kind of dirty, as I already stated. Im gonna go now...
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seiko Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist
"What? Sex Poetry! No! It's about sharpening a pencil. Or a sword."

Best line ever! I usually don't read other peoples' comments, but I'm glad I did for this one. Hahaha!

I think this kind of poetry is a little shocking as well.. Shocking being the polite term.
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Kit-Kit-Ridge Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad I made you laugh, perhaps I'll be some cheesy comedian that everyone loves someday.

And, yeah this type of poetry is... the key to being uncomfortable. Not that I dislike raunchy humor, hell I'm dirtier then half the dudes I know! But just coming out and saying "Im gonna shove my hotdog up your donut" kind doesn't do well for the atmosphere and over all feeling of safety.  Or maybe that's just me.

(Also, "Once we're both satisfied I'll set you free"? What, were we locked in some dudes basement? )
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seiko Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist
Ahahahaha! I know, right?! And, just to play devil's advocate, if the..receiver? ISNT locked in some basement or held against their will, shouldn't the act of satisfaction be the setting free part? *facepalm*

XD If you were a comedian, I'd have to watch your stand-up at least once. Heheh.
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Kit-Kit-Ridge Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you!
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Flight45 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WELL THEN!
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It took me a few min. to figure out what the hell you meant. now I know. Wow man. O////O very, uh creative. 
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Altair01 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondrevilplz::iconsaysplz:...charming...
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TheRealBeautifly Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
................
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:iconxxdarklolitaquotesxx:
:iconwtfskrilexplz: dats gross.
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? I found it funny.
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:iconxxdarklolitaquotesxx:
yes really.Skrillex-Facepalm gif 
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well, each women to her own I guess. *shrug*
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:iconxxdarklolitaquotesxx:
yerp. o3o
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconxxdarklolitaquotesxx:
nice display pic btw, is that smile dog? Ok, problem fixed, emoticon 
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. :D
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JabberDuck Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
and that's how it is done....
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m-agikrap Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
NOPE. NOPE. NOPE. NOPE. (You are seriously amazing)
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LiquidLibido Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Dante~ ♥ 
I love DMC4 he was such a baaaabe!! 
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XanderWolf Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, artistic and blunt, but not rude and smutty, thumbs up from me!
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Shiyome Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
well.. you know you are hot dontcha ^^ xD
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liznone Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ROTFL... The blatancy of this..nice.
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ElectricSky25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads poem*
Why am I thinking about a crane with the big metal ball destroying a house?
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Mintylsun Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOOOOO NOOO IT CAN'T BE WHAT I THINK IT ISSSS.... D: But the poem is greaaat..
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Katsune-lofoxx Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well....hello there~~~~
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derek-of-spades Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
if anyone ever doubted you were male this poem certainly proves that you are a man lol. i have to say i admire the bluntness of your words and your confidence. all i can say is i'm glad the words 'giant cock' don't feature :P
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deadmarrie Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student General Artist
this was fucking sexy
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graffitica Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done. ;)
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mad-shiz Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my go
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:iconmad-shiz:
mad-shiz Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*god
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:iconmad-shiz:
mad-shiz Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
too scared to be able to finish sentence apparently
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