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Through sickness and health,
poorness and wealth,
real love is usually known.

But we, my dear,
share nothing but sorrow:
cry together, smile alone.
I know I can't write, but this is what comes out of my heart sometimes.
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jbone007 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
Short and to the point. I like it. 
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AraujoV Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  New member
This hits me hard.
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felinepanther6 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Intense.
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Fro7a Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's beautiful, keep writing whatever comes to your heart :heart:
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Flareon-of-Isis Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, I feel you on this O.o
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maroellchen Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
and what comes out of our hearts is sometimes so much more than all those big words and great speeches ... 'cause it's unique and honest. So no, I don't think that you can't write, on the contrary. keep writing such amazing little things. :)
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dalynet Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for adding my pink tulip pic to your collection.  Your writing is awesome by the way!
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megnezaj Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Digital Artist
painful, however well written. keep it up :)
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lunar-glow Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
It seems painfully obvious to me at this point that you know something that I don't. I'm afraid I'm not deep or worn enough to write like that.
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FunkyCake Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist
true story...
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xXxRising-AngelxXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw'e, don't say you can't write.
You're writing is wonderful! c: :hug:
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IGNITIONNINJA555 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are an awsome writer!
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Ruizux Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can write and it's great that you write from your heart, because they are the best poems. 
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chainedheart977 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Can't write my butt. (I'm doing my best to not think about it, cuz if I did, I'd cry.)
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:iconforeignblackjack:
ForeignBlackJack Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is the most beautiful thing I have read to date. Keep writing! :D
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AnimeMaven Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dem feels ;-; DUDE THAT IS BEAUTIFUL!! YOU ARE GREAT AT WRITING
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gillykitty Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay,my feels have been damaged today.
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is amazing can you give me writing lessons cuz this is amazing =D
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LilySilva Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This touches my heart..........whats amazing is that not many things do..........
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KMusicDreamer Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is truly beautiful. Well done.
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AnsilaLupaBabe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the passion you put into this.♡ You painted a whole story in the mind with only a few sentences! Awesome work!:)
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Hizaki-sama Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so touching. *.*
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aedan0896 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
No, it's really good. I love it. If you ask me, it's best always when it comes from the heart, when you don't feel what you're writing, it has no meaning to you. Keep writing, you're good :)
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ProjectPsychoZ Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
This is so sad....but really good!
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PanteraYoshi Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
well done, I like it
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Dreamingofparadise1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love it. Short but full of truth.  I can relate to this.
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mashabraslavsky Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
So much tenderness ...
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Rainbowflower333 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the last line.
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Okamikiba18 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
true, it is the most beautiful one
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StaciaLynn Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Thoughtful and expressive. Any more wording would take the meaning from this poem. Very nice indeed.
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thedarkliz Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IM GONNA CRY!!!!!
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PHOENIXireStar Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
smile... 
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LilyKittyCat Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woooow this is so meaningful ;o;
I love it~ :'3
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animelover864 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a beautiful poet :) (Smile) 
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SearingBlaze000 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Right in the feels :( 
this is beautifully written 
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:iconzm156:
Zm156 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I feel you,man. I also love this poem. Nice job:-)
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how this feels... 
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LethalPrincesa95 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Writer
Awwww that's sad but nice I'm in love with poetry n urs is amazing 
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thalle-my-honey Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so f***ing sad :P
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moonheartstar123 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
nice
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Blak-Foxx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's really nice dude ^^ I think I'll check out more stuff o:
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MarshallCarlyleFaith Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Short, but very touching! It makes my heart weep! Awesome work! Very nice!
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teddybears98 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is really REALLY good!!!
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VictoriaMay Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Short and painfull.
Perfection, I suppose.
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that is so beautiful, i realy love it.
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MariusK Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
I Like. Tasting melancholy too this evening.
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LouTrah Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Writer
Love it!
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ellenah1 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow that is beautiful.
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