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DP Poetry by MaggieMayPlay


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When I found you,
myself I asked:
what good have I done to deserve you?

Now I know you saved me
just to kill me slowly,
and deserve it I do.
I know I can't write. I just say what my heart feels sometimes, and this is what comes out.
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:iconakari1527:
Akari1527 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is good. It expresses the emotion perfectly.
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chavezc618 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Tragically moving.... thanks for the fav btw.. .some good writing:)
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MaroniZitroni Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014   Photographer
so true.
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The-World-Is-Bored Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
Thanks for the Fav on Heavy Prospects, you writing is great, from the heart indeed!
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manora8 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
 what a beautiful words like it ..
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Leia0405 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:(...i feel you bro.
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lunar-glow Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Ouch... Like a rose. It's lovely to behold until you hit the bitter thorn. Nice.
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:iconluvarthe:
Luvarthe Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
beautifl.. so meaning
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chainedheart977 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Don't they all?
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:iconmonixan:
Monixan Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Love><pain
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:iconmonstar223:
Monstar223 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Photographer
You say that you can't write, yet this is amazing in my eyes.
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:iconjanelou:
JaneLou Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my... dear..this cuts deep.
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julietaroad13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
cool :D
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:iconallgr8artist:
ALLgr8artist Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
hmmm this hit's very close to my heart~Thank You for sharing this...
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow cool i like it
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BadeTeto Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love your writing especially the dirty writing! makes me feel like im gonna cum all over myself. 
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Thederpygurl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
how fricken dirty are you?! XDDDD
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BadeTeto Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really dirty... ;)
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yellowpsyche Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how short this is yet still so pungent. Also very abstract, so I feel like a lot of different situations could relate to it, including my own. Very well done :)
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LilySilva Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you......just.....thanks.........
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Shatteredlinez Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014   General Artist
I don't know about the can't write part.  I can completely relate to this. 
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DemonHowl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
nice
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:icongin-zura:
Gin-Zura Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student
Amazing
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:iconmissingmom:
missingmom Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow....I think this has felt true for many many people.
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guardian-lover Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can definitely write!!! I could never put across a huge meaning and so much emotion into 6 small lines  I love your work!!!
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musicalsilent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I love the fact that you packed such a big story into six lines. I've never been able to do it.
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BlackDeathScythe Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
i think it is maybe a short poeam, but many feelings in it. You´re right to write what you feel. Then you don´t lie at yourself
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ScarletBlack16 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I think you can write, it's beautiful:)
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:iconsouleaterangel777:
Souleaterangel777 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I write poems, but they are not the best. You are still a good writer, keep it up :)
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Souleaterangel777 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome poem :)
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in-your-coffeemaker Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
actually this is quite nice
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:iconkittysib:
KittySib Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Beautiful and sad :hug:
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joselyn565 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014   Artist
Very short and yet it has feeling and gives thought, I like it.
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TheTotalOtaku Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, I think you're pretty good! I SUCK at writing short poems :p
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sme888 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This sums up my last relationship. Well said. Thanks for the fav :)
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thedarkliz Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IM CRY I CANT KEEP IN THE TEARS!!!!!!!!
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Sweeneygirl310593 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Speaking from the heart is often where the best art comes from. A very sad poem but I like the style and is a great little piece...
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virnagray Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way you wrote this♡♥♡
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:iconkitkat127:
kitkat127 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
"shiiiiiiiiiiiit"

that just got out from my mouth
this poem struck me
in many ways
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PHOENIXireStar Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful . 
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Fabianschica101 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
saying what's in your heart usually makes the best written art. This is something that people can all relate to, which makes this great.
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NiftyMumzy Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wow...well written...So powerful and deep.
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:iconzm156:
Zm156 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
You're a good writer and I love this poem.
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:iconlivingdreamer97:
LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can write and this is VERY moving.
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ninja0power Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
wow you can wright
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teddibuns Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student General Artist
you certainly can write. this is simple and amazing. great job. 
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KasuChii Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
E3 
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:iconkuhane-chan:
Kuhane-chan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
This reminds me of Bukowski "Find what you love and let it kill you".
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ProfessorSuze Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Simplicity can sometimes be the greatest ally when it comes to personal creations.  Thanks for sharing a part of your heart :)
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thalle-my-honey Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
if you ask me , why i'd like to have it in :iconseverily-club: -> it just fits so great ! ^^
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